Sample Audio Review
Sample Audio Review with Notes
Hibbison's Note: The
following table shows the script of an audio review that was burned on a CD
and delivered to A-201-R in a jewel case. (Other students who did
multiple files mailed their CDs in cases inside protective envelopes
obtained at the US Post Office.) Her CD included
an MP3 file of the song (4.5
her PowerPoint file (3.5 Mb)
individual .wav files linked
to two slides of the PowerPoint that included the analysis shown in the
bottom half of this web page (8 files totaling 48 Mb)
her spoken .wav file for her
reading of the script below, left (34 Mb)
her presentation script in a
Word file (0.3 Mb)
In the left column is the
script, which the student copied to me, since sound quality on many
recordings was marginal due to low volume. On the right, I have noted
mostly positive characterizations of the student's content.
Script of PRESENTATION
by a student
I chose for my presentation, “My Own Prison” by
Creed. I chose this song as it made a long lasting impression on me
when it was first introduced. I thought the subject material to be
refreshing and it had the music qualities I enjoyed, generally
classified as alternative rock. This song is an autobiographical song
of front man Scott Stapp’s troubled times. He wrote this song at a time
in his life when he realized he could not continue to blame others for
the situations he had placed himself in. He had come to grips that the
only blame rested on him, therefore the phrase, “I’ve created MY OWN
PRISON.” This helped him move forward in his life and to take control
of his own life. Scott has been quoted as stating writing this song was
a turning point in his life. The song is delivered with just the
correct variety of tones and harmonies along with complimentary
acoustics to make you feel the message he is trying to relay.
Scott Stapp grew up in a religious atmosphere by
his strict Pentecostal minister father. His biological father left when
he was a preschooler, but his mother remarried and his new step- father
also believed strongly in the church. One of Stapp’s childhood
punishments was to re-write the Bible verses to teach him a lesson. He
was rarely allowed to listen to any music with an electric guitar in
it. His father believed rock music to be the music of the devil. By
the time he was a teenager he began to question the beliefs that were
thrust upon him his whole life. Although he was still a devout
Christian, he knew there was nothing wrong with the music he liked.
By the time he left for college, it started a
period of both outer and inner turmoil. There was a freedom he
experienced so he experimented with drugs, while battling the inner
turmoil inside. He was kicked out of the Christian college for smoking
marijuana. He became very confused at this time because he had always
been taught to believe that Christians forgive and fellow Christians are
there for you when you are down and out. So here he was down and out by
an unforgiving school staff and most of his peers. He couldn’t go home
because of friction there, he had nowhere to go.
This is also the time that Scott began to put his
thoughts down on paper. He wrote them down mostly in a rhyme scheme of
abab. These ‘poems’ were the basis of many of their songs but
especially MY OWN PRISON. It has been altered slightly to present
musically, but emphasis was added by the different voice tones and
musical instruments used. This is displayed in the Power Point
Maybe I understood this
easily because of my own experiences with organized religion. I believe
that knowing the history of the lead singer is important to
understanding the song for the message that is being delivered. The
musical harmonies are done brilliantly to help deliver that message.
The music compliments the feelings that were felt while writing the
song. The lead singer also does a great job with his different voice
tones to reflect those feelings as well. I think the composition allows
for an easy interpretation of what was meant. It is also refreshing to
see that there is actually a positive message in a piece of music,
considering the make-up of most modern music
+ purpose of choice
+ biographical background
+ title explained
+ paraphrased info. from the songwriter
- This vague sentence, placed in the position where
the thesis would be expected, misleads listeners.
+ early biography
+ later biography
+ transition from biography to analysis of song
+ reference to another file on the same
student-made CD, which had sound files for parts of the song linked to
PowerPoint slides analyzing that section of the song.
+ Overview of the analysis from the PowerPoint
The following notes are from 2 of the several slides in the PowerPoint,
which included copyrighted materials that students can use for school
presentations, but which I cannot display on the Web, such as photos from
CDs, interview responses by band members from a website. The numbering
of this student's commentary, which she put on the slides, corresponded to
numbered parts (verses) of the song, which she printed beside these comments
on her PowerPoint slides.
These comments by the student
demonstrate some of the analysis one can state for a song. See the
checklist for more ideas.
song starts with soft music, guitar only, light drums start in. The lyrics
begin relatively monotone.
imagery is used describing the feelings being experienced. Coldness and
feeling alone. There are reflections of the supernatural. He realizes he
is guilty of creating his own prison (shackled by his sentence) and there is
no amends. It is a realization that figuratively burns his own skin.
3. Now we
see more about his realization. Yes, he has created his own prison but he
decides to hold his head up high even if it is just to spite others. He
sees the sun figuratively and feels left out of it but wants to find safety
in the meek. The chorus is actually sung by the lead guitarist, Mark
Tremonti, in a calm ‘enlightening’ type of voice. Drums accentuate at the
Biblical references showing his beliefs and whom he realizes is the only one
that can help him.
verse is repeated twice for emphasis and also with a louder, angrier voice
tone. This creates importance on what is being said. There are stories
that he had a bad hangover and felt like dying; literally banging his head
it hurt so badly. More attention is led to the fact that he is saying there
is no time for mourning on how he got in this situation and the
all-absorbing self-pity. There just isn’t time for it.
the chorus is repeated creating emphasis. It is followed by a guitar solo,
which also creates importance to the chorus and allows for reflection on the
words and feeling it creates.
verse follows a melancholy guitar solo that allowed for reflection. It also
serves as a good intro to the main theme to the song. The singer again
speaks loudly and repeats the verse twice.. The only one he is seeking help
from has confirmed what he thought was true. He created his own prison.
Chorus is repeated twice
and on the second rendition, the lead singer chimes in his main message,
“I’ve created my own prison” repeating it louder and louder to drive the
The main theme of the song has been exclaimed in the previous
verse but he wants to confirm that although these things are true, time
should not be spent in self-pity and to move on.